Poor Imp

This is still amusing...somehow. 0o ^_^ And I think following the debating debacle concering characterization - you should add a huge dispute between some of the SPEWers over whether they're ...

Nay. What bob just said is that it is a reality of our world that suicide is wrong - the wrong attitude towards life, the wrong orientation towardslaw. Suicide - ...

Grieve. Break down and sob. Beat my head on the wall. ... All right. Ha. I could though, right? -Tov --- What's the question that's been nettling you most for ...

Hullo!... I'll add to all the greetings. ^_^ I'm Imp. I hope you enjoy YWS - it really can become too addicting - but 'tis good. If you've got questions, ...

I like it even more, now that it's becoming more clear who this fellow is, and perhaps why he is... But, yes - I enjoy the narrative very much; a ...

Hullo Adam... I like your style, and some of the dark fantasy and bluntly eerie description - though I've yet to critique anything of yours. ^_^'' This seemed a bit ...

"...W'll yeah. I have time to change." (And Emma - wouldn't an American teenager say mom ? lol.)

A startling beginning, into obscurity and back out into - I assume - reality. It seemed a bit worn to me...a theme that remained symbolic and so rather dropped at ...

Hello and welcome, Adam. A whole novel finished ? I can't say I've done as much. 'Hope to see some of it posted...and as stated, I think, before...any questions feel ...

In Caer Calen, the mages are philosophers, careless in their enumeration of dark and light, evil and well. Always in balance they say - beyond whatever some choose to do ...

"A group of alchemists use their new skills to slowly 'replace' the old monarchy." What with the summary, following, I like the sound - seems to have a good source ...

Perhaps you could shift your lethal endings to a lesser character? But then, why did you start killing MCs off in the first?

...Lobster. Wait. You - meant that honestly? Did you know I'm not stupid? - Tov -- Rather be a soldier of a spy?

It's a good exercise, DD. ^_^ I've done something similar myself...though I'm not sure if consciously. I journal; take images, thoughts from the day and wind it into something. Timing ...

That was brilliant - even in the specific sense of the word; light - or enlightening. Deft - sometimes ironic - balance of the fetus' questions, comments against those of ...